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Where Moonlight Gathers by =platinummyr:iconplatinummyr:



In the place where moonlight gathers,
And the clock is ticking twelve.
Here we gather one more time,
And I wish the hour never ends.
We speak words in utter silence,
But the time is late, and closing comes,
The bits won't fly, and we must away.

But in the loneliness of silence,
I wonder at her words and her grace.
For we have laughed until the end,
And with formal nights, we make amends.

"Knight" I shout in silence,
With tear drops on my heart.
We seek fair sleep and better dreams...
For all the long and broken night.
Then comes the sweet reply.
To cover your ears, for the dawn breaks
It comes once more, after dark.

We'll laugh a lot, with words
And rarely sound.
Sometimes it's silly,
But never wasted.

Well do I really know her?
How could I say a thing as this.
But do we ever know anyone?
Is it all just a ruse and
Will we ever lower the mask...
In utter silence as I write this,
I could see what time will never know.

What do we want from all this time?
It's not a waste, but why is this?
©2008-2009 =platinummyr
:iconplatinummyr:

Author's Comments

This is :iconcyansprinkles: gift-art poetry for getting the 8k page views screen shot :)

Hope she enjoys, and may you also enjoy?

^.^

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:iconpaladin343:
Give me a while to figure out exactly why, but i like this.... Maybe it's the wordplay...

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:poke: Thou hast been POKED!

I am the :hug: :ninja: !!

Just remember, no matter where you go, there you are.--Buckaroo Banzai
:iconbrisni:
Oh my...
I really like this one.
Very soft and rhythmic.
Like wrapping a velvet scarf around you.
A blue one.

With tear drops on my heart.
We seek fair sleep and better dreams...
For all the long and broken night.


Beautiful imagery and word play.
So well spoken for someone silent.

:star:

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To understand love, you must experience love.
To understand God, you must experience God.

[God is love. Love is real.]
:iconjoannastar:
you have beautiful words :heart:

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I am not fond of expecting catastrophes, but there are cracks in the universe. --Sydney Smith


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:iconcyansprinkles:
Oh yay! How do you do that? It's amazing! :)

Yup, we do have some pretty good times... at the cost of normal sleeping patterns, lol. ^.^

Alas, unfortunately I can't answer your last question either... but I must say, yes! I definitely enjoy it!
:iconplatinummyr:
XD

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconplatinummyr:
:) Thanks!!

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconplatinummyr:
Thank you so much!! :heart:

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconplatinummyr:
It's not a question you were supposed to answer anyway, so we're all good :D

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconpaladin343:
It's cool.

--
:poke: Thou hast been POKED!

I am the :hug: :ninja: !!

Just remember, no matter where you go, there you are.--Buckaroo Banzai
:icontoonmasta:
Wonderful! I enjoyed reading it. Um... I don't feel like I have a lot of creativeness to share, though... Kinda brain-dead from finals... ^^"

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All waiters are just seagulls in human form. - ~Murasaki-Usagi

雨 + 夜 = 霧 = :D

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