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When you're gone...
I'd hold the wind if I thought
That it would bring you back.
I'd drink the sky in hopes
the stars could shine
a little brighter,
to lead you home
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SweetBlackRose13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, this is the sweetest thing... :heart: Stopped my heart and made it beat a little faster. Just the honesty of it, the simplicity, the love coursing through every word.. breathtaking. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: :love: :heart:
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SweetBlackRose13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart::heart::heart:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009   Writer
:happycry:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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dynamitehackr416 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
:heart: :heart: :heart:

I really really like this one. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: :love: :aww: :blush: :blush: :blush:
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DaughterofZion Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009   Writer
Wow... that is amazing. And very touching.
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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baby-filly Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009   Writer
Beautiful poem. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blush: Thanks!
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baby-filly Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009   Writer
:aww: You're welcome!
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
PS: I love your signature :heart:
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baby-filly Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009   Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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SweetBlackRose13 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh sugary goodness :D :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :blush:
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Tsirachel Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
That's so sweet. Whoever that is dedicated to is very lucky. :D
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :heart: :blush:
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ALovelyMeInside Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Awwwww :aww: Very nice, love it.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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poetcourt Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Professional Writer
i know how that feels
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah...
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poetcourt Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Professional Writer
you know if i could, i would
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artistic-writer Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Sooo nice!:heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
it's great.... :D is it about anyone in particular?
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
A bit. :hug:
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
awww.... thats so sweet :hug: well, she's a very lucky girl!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: :) PS: I love your avatar!
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
:huggle: thank you! :giggle:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle:
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halpal101 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
:D
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SamNickole12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Student Photographer
Beautiful. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blush:
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SamNickole12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Student Photographer
:hug:
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olilea Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
That's so sweet :heart:
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:
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flawedfairytale Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Student Writer
Just beautiful. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Awww :blush:
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BlueSilverUU Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
beautiful...
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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