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There's only one thing I wish.
That I could promise you alone
That with all my strength,
And for all my days
That I will love you as my own.

But I could never tell you that
My love is not so strong.
But there is a love inside this
Cold and weary heart of mine.

His thoughts, are higher than mine
His words, are wiser than mine
And His love, is stronger than mine
He never changes, never fails
And never seeks His own
So by the promises of Him,
Who lives in me and you
Oh, I know the words I say to you
Are words I'm going to do.

I know that I love you
So much more than words can say
But I don't really know how long
Just how long it will last
I'm not asking for forever,
Just for one more moment now.

Old time, he's ticking on me
Well, I'm so sad since you went away
Love was the last place I wanted to be
But I'm lost in these woods
And I like it this way
Please just come and stay with me.

Don't promise me that
You'll be mine forever
Just come and give me
This one day.
:iconplatinummyr:
Heh, I wrote a love poem... for :heart:
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:iconwourk:
*does not have words* :+fav:
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=platinummyr Jan 4, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ ...
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:iconpussy-asbest:
This is a very sensible point you make here, not being able to guarantee eternal love. It takes some courage to confront a partner with such a view. I like the way you just go on and on with your narrative and still maintain a very high quality of speech.
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=platinummyr Jan 4, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thanks!! :D Lol, sorry for not responding quicker, but I didn't see your message in my box :)
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~CapnKat Nov 21, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
That was so beautiful. Definitely a favorite. It just screams out all what I want to say to a particular person...hmph. lol
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=platinummyr Nov 21, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thanks! :w00t:
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:iconliving4him:
I want to cry...
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=platinummyr Oct 29, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:( Why?
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:iconliving4him:
I know that I love you
So much more than words can say
But I don't really know how long
Just how long it will last
I'm not asking for forever,
Just for one more moment now.



that is why...
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=platinummyr Oct 29, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
true... :| its kinda sad... :( but its the way I feel.
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