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i still think i'm sundrenched thoughts
and wateredup phrases of longfound dreams.
i still remember those starlit nightskies
and whispered iloveyous found beaten
on the corners of broken curbs.
i can't escape these thoughtsideaswords
that shine from your moonlight eyes:
i am whispered conversations in a smile.

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wateredup phrases are all I'll ever be

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:iconliving4him:
even if you are only falling water from the sky
eventually when you hit the ground
you will phase into a puddle;
everyone knows
what it takes to make a mighty sea
it is that single water droplet
that you claim to be
that the eyes of the angels
have cried.
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:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Oct 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: :huggle: Thanks Lauren :aww:
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:iconindiana-w:
~indiana-w Oct 22, 2009  Student Writer
Wound up like too many springs; the tendrils of a vine, coiling.
Interesting use of words.
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:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :love: Thanks so muchh!
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~indiana-w Oct 22, 2009  Student Writer
:heart: No problem.
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~NiennaSwift Sep 23, 2009  Professional Writer
I love every line of this! Wonderful style!
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=platinummyr Sep 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :love:
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~SweetBlackRose13 Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
That's amazing.
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=platinummyr Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :love:
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