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the truth is, i never really know.
i don't know what i'm feeling,
or why my heart skips three beats
when she walks down hallways
that i've never even seen.

the truth is, that somedays i
feel like i'm holding air,
bottling feelings till they explode.
whispering secrets to the night sky
and wishing i could feel.

i don't know what i'm not saying,
and i wish that i could hold her.
but that can't happen. it's not possible.
i can't be there when the sun sets;

all this fear is seeping out
of the wholes that i thought
i closed up so very long ago.
and i don't know what to think.

the truth is: i don't know
the secret is: i wish i did

you wanted the truth, so
the truth is what you'll find.
nocaps? :jawdrop: what has gotten into me? :giggle: This.. just is. I hope you enjoy it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I love it ^^ Great job! ^^

I really like how you can feel the emotion as well, somehow it connects to me ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Well this piece has quite a bit of personal meaning. Maybe I put some secret effort-sauce into it? :giggle:

PS: I just saw your signature. That's cool.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Haha, then I suggest using that sauce more often, it's good for you and your writing ^^

Thank you very much, just typed it out this morning ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
But it's not so good for my heart. Kinda have to go through some intense stuff before this kind of poetry comes out of me. :( :aww:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Oh, I can connect with that ^^ If you've looked at my gallery there's a few of them that can be rather depressing ^^;
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
^^; Certainly.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
^^ But no worries! Optimism is something I try to think of often ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I like to be optimistic..
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
bottling feelings till they explode.
whispering secrets to the night sky
and wishing i could feel.


beautiful.
:heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes:
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