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the truth is, i never really know.
i don't know what i'm feeling,
or why my heart skips three beats
when she walks down hallways
that i've never even seen.

the truth is, that somedays i
feel like i'm holding air,
bottling feelings till they explode.
whispering secrets to the night sky
and wishing i could feel.

i don't know what i'm not saying,
and i wish that i could hold her.
but that can't happen. it's not possible.
i can't be there when the sun sets;

all this fear is seeping out
of the wholes that i thought
i closed up so very long ago.
and i don't know what to think.

the truth is: i don't know
the secret is: i wish i did

you wanted the truth, so
the truth is what you'll find.
nocaps? :jawdrop: what has gotten into me? :giggle: This.. just is. I hope you enjoy it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I love it ^^ Great job! ^^

I really like how you can feel the emotion as well, somehow it connects to me ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Well this piece has quite a bit of personal meaning. Maybe I put some secret effort-sauce into it? :giggle:

PS: I just saw your signature. That's cool.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Haha, then I suggest using that sauce more often, it's good for you and your writing ^^

Thank you very much, just typed it out this morning ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
But it's not so good for my heart. Kinda have to go through some intense stuff before this kind of poetry comes out of me. :( :aww:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Oh, I can connect with that ^^ If you've looked at my gallery there's a few of them that can be rather depressing ^^;
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
^^; Certainly.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
^^ But no worries! Optimism is something I try to think of often ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I like to be optimistic..
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
bottling feelings till they explode.
whispering secrets to the night sky
and wishing i could feel.


beautiful.
:heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes:
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fudgeandbiscuits Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010   Writer
This really reminded me of a song by Rosi Golan. It's called Come Around, if you want to look it up (:.
Once again, this is wonderful- looks like I'm going to have to deviantwatch you to stop myself favouriting EVERYTHING! :D
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehehehehe :love: :heart: :blush: Thaaanks. I shall, I shall! :love:
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Victimize-Pixie Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
no caps is one of those wonderful addictions.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:! oh yes it is.
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Victimize-Pixie Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
yay! :heart: i feel devious for saying that. but truthful, it is.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner May 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Was that Yoda speak? :giggle:! :heart:!!
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Victimize-Pixie Featured By Owner May 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
forsureitwas! love star wars.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yaystarwarsisamazing:heart:
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Victimize-Pixie Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: starwarsisuncomparable
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Sure it is. You'd just be wrong ;)

:giggle:
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kazumisangel Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010
Some people could learn to be more terrified of the truth...it can be a scary thing.

*gasp* No capitals? :faint:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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SamNickole12 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Student Photographer
I love this. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
<3 Thaanks :blush:
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flawedfairytale Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2010  Student Writer
Haha! Was thinking the same thing! But it allows it to read much more softly, which really emphasises the content. Beautiful. :]
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thaaanks :aww:
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