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She was sitting lonely at the keyboard
Staring tightly to the screen
She heard the loud phone as it rung
Broke the silence of the night.

She answered with a chearful heart
Heard the words that "Kyle has died."
She couldn't believe the words tonight
But still the words came once again.

Silence fills her mind and soul
Left her screaming and all torn
Life shouldn't trully be this way
But death has sown and has reaped.

To the river the boy had gone
Forgot to wear a simple jacket
Born to die at such young age.
What good you ask shall come of this?

To the river she is going
Bringing pain she cannot bear
All the friends and people going
Singing songs of great despair

Tears are left to stream the face
Soak like water and like rain
Family hurt more than she is
Nothing left for her to do.

From the river she is coming
Keeping pain she still must bear
All the crying she is doing
Is the only way to care.

When she gets home this bloody night
All the phones are ringing thus.
Not a spare of silence left for her
No time to cry and grieve

Still she tells us of the sorrows
And pains that she shall bear
All the grief that satan borrows
And the grin that he has there

As the lord has taught me thus
I shall grieve with her I must
These words, they are just words
Like the songs that fly away.
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This is a poem for Mandilinn, who just lost a dear friend of hers. I wrote this poem maybe to help comfort her, and definetly to show that I care.

To the river I am going, bringing sins I cannot bear;
Come and cleanse me, come forgive me; Lord, I need to meet you there.
In these waters, healing mercy, flows with freedom from despair;
I am going to that river, Lord, I need to meet You there.

Precious Jesus, I am ready, to surrender ev'ry care;
Take my hand now, lead me closer;
Lord, I need to meet You there.

Come and join us in the river;
Come find life beyond compare;
He is calling, He is waiting; Jesus longs to meet you there.
He is calling, He is waiting; Jesus longs to meet you there.
To the River, the Song...
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:iconrickona:
very sad, but very touching.
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=platinummyr Nov 13, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thanks!
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:iconmagaman:
man, i feel yah, i feel her, she must be going tru alot but God is good :nod:
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=platinummyr Aug 21, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
all the time!
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=platinummyr Aug 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
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~jeannie64 Aug 17, 2006  Professional Writer
well you can do the same for me sometime ok is that a deal high five babe xj
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=platinummyr Aug 17, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
hehehehe ;) deal!
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~jeannie64 Aug 17, 2006  Professional Writer
oky doky deal babe xj
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~jeannie64 Aug 17, 2006  Professional Writer
well really enjoy yourself sweetheart life is for having fun too you know dont like serious stuff all the time been nice being the attention for your fun and games today but i will get you back hahahahahah kidding babe have awonderful time at camp but be safe too ok xj
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