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n

nightsky dreams and
never spoken whispers:
the many meanings
attached to peopleplacesthings.

echoes of wisdom
found in the emptiness
between the stars:
beginnings of a definition
of who someone ought to be.

Is there any power in a name?
Finally! The Letter N has arrived. Edit: clarified some of the wording.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012   Writer
ohmygod

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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:!!! <333 <33 Thanks so much for reading. I really appreciate it.
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sbroxmysxo18 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
"echoes of wisdom found in the emptiness between the stars" <--Absolutely perfect. I love this <3
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thaaanks :heart:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
The clarified wording really helps a lot ^^ I say great job ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :) Yeah, I really wanted to stick with name.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Yeah, and I'm glad you did ^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I like this one, though I wasn't expecting the word Name at the end. Maybe a different N word? I'm not sure, but I love the poem part ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
What were you expecting? :aww:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I'm not too sure actually. I just wasn't expecting name.... I'll look into it later if you want ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ok. I think this could use work, but I don't have a direction to take it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Nearing is a good word to have in there I think. And I'll just throw some random N words here:

-nature
-naive
-nation
-needle
-negate
-neglet
-neccessary
-need
-negotiate
-new
-nightingale (yes this is a word ^^)

I just looked in a dictionary, hope this helps ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Thanks :)
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
You're welcome ^^
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009   Writer
Positively gorgeous. :heart: I'm glad I have tons of deviations in my inbox to read...it means I get to keep reading/looking at beautiful things.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :heart:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009   Writer
:hug:
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SweetBlackRose13 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Short and sweet; just beautiful. I love this sososomuch.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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artistic-writer Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh, N! My favorite letter!:giggle: :+fav:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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baby-filly Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009   Writer
Love it. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :heart:
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baby-filly Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009   Writer
:iconsmileyplz:
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MyAwkwardSilence Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009
:D
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle: Thanks :aww:
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ALovelyMeInside Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
The poem of the day is sponsored by the letter "N". Haha, I love it. :)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :giggle:
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