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a beginning of letters
advanced into words.

words arranged by phrases
attached to afterthoughts
of a sentence

this is the allowance
called language.

Why do we often ignore a beginning?
So I got stole this idea from [link] by :iconsbroxmysxo18:

Basically I'm going to try and write a poem about each letter. I started with the obvious, the beginning.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student General Artist
I love it! It's great after you edited it! ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you much :heart:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student General Artist
You're very welcome ^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student General Artist
not bad for the first one ^^ Though you can tell if you read the later ones first that you get better as you go kind of thing ^^

By the way, I'm reading them in order and most likely commenting, so get ready for a whole lot of messages ^^

Still great job ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ironically, this is still one of my favorites. I might edit it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student General Artist
I think if you did a little editing it'd be absolutely great! Right now, it's just great, but still great ^^

Hopefully that made sense ^^;
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I re-wrote this one <3
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student General Artist
I shall read it then ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I saw that you did :heart:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student General Artist
Yep ^^
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