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a

a beginning of letters
advanced into words.

words arranged by phrases
attached to afterthoughts
of a sentence

this is the allowance
called language.

Why do we often ignore a beginning?
So I got stole this idea from [link] by :iconsbroxmysxo18:

Basically I'm going to try and write a poem about each letter. I started with the obvious, the beginning.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I love it! It's great after you edited it! ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you much :heart:
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:iconazeeratheninja:
AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
You're very welcome ^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
not bad for the first one ^^ Though you can tell if you read the later ones first that you get better as you go kind of thing ^^

By the way, I'm reading them in order and most likely commenting, so get ready for a whole lot of messages ^^

Still great job ^^
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ironically, this is still one of my favorites. I might edit it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I think if you did a little editing it'd be absolutely great! Right now, it's just great, but still great ^^

Hopefully that made sense ^^;
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I re-wrote this one <3
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I shall read it then ^^
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I saw that you did :heart:
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:iconazeeratheninja:
AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Yep ^^
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean. It does need some work.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Yeah ^^ Can't wait to read the edited one ^^
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LittleMissNowhere Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
What's in a beginning?

Possibility :)

This is a really cool project!
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :aww: :heart:
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living4him Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009
Is it true that the end is just another beginning?
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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kazumisangel Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
Interesting.

A.
The beginning
First, to start of
The primary part.
The initiate

The triad
Three, become one
Together, combined

A.
The one
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Lilielo-Lawliet Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
great last line. just trying to think of my favourite letters. v, h, l, j
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe.
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Lilielo-Lawliet Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
?
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IsaacsDevil4108 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009  Professional Photographer
awww how lovely ^_^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :)
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IsaacsDevil4108 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009  Professional Photographer
hmm so shake what do you think i should draw? :dance:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know....
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IsaacsDevil4108 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional Photographer
so much help lol xD
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'm thinking!!!
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IsaacsDevil4108 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional Photographer
okay thinking time hmm i could draw fly leaf from my story =D or i could draw creime from my story or i could draw hana from my story or i could draw anything ^_^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Draw story peoples! :D
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sbroxmysxo18 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
See people love my concept. and I like that your writing about each individual letter but I think mines going to be a bit different.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I'm aware that I'm not doing exactly what you are. I took your idea and gave it a spin :)
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sbroxmysxo18 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
Yup..
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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artistic-writer Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Very interseting! I espcially like the end. :thumbsup:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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artistic-writer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
welcome!
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GrayceDreamer Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
Oooo, this should prove to be interesting! I'm definately curious as to how you'll expand on the alphabet. :)

a lovely beginning!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Woo Thanks :heart:
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DaughterofZion Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009   Writer
Interesting concept... I look forward to seeing the rest. At the end you could write one long poem and call it "Alphabet" or something.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Woo :D
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