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So I made a slightly more advanced animation :) Look! He waves now!

:heart: Hope you enjoy. Suggestions still welcome!

EDIT:

I made the outline black so it was easier to see, and also made the blink take longer between each time :)

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:iconkatez-chan:
Aww, it's really cute. That expression is adorable.
Once again, beautifully shaded, nice smooth animation.
I think maybe the blink is unnecessary, seeing as his eyes are already closed? It just seems flickery.

Another thing you might try is to maybe have the hand a little further away from the head, because it's a little unclear what he's doing, whether he's waving or rubbing his head. Having it be a wider, more sweeping (well you know what I mean) movement and a little less restricted would make it easier to watch (if you can even understand that. ^^;)

All in all, a great little emote.
It's a nice simple motion, and pretty well done. :+fav:
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:iconfiveonthe:
Ahh, that's cute. :giggle:
Gawd, I gave so much critiques today, but this one looks like one of the cutest ones :)

The way it blinks is awesome, I love the way you animated that, but to be honest it blinks way too frequent. Try make it 0.5 seconds per frame or if that's too frequent for you, make it longer.

It's mouth is great. No changes needed there. :)
The emoticon is simple, basic and cool.

The colour could be a little more brighter, being that it's a little (just a little) hard to see its details, but maybe that's just me.

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Great job.
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:iconidontknowdoyou:
Awww, adorable :D

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Hah. I like it. :)

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Woo!

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:iconemrose88:
AWWW *waves back* Great job again.

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Adorable! I like this one even more :aww:

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I shall explode from adorableness!

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Thanks :heart:

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