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Starlight dancer
On the moonbright windowsill,
with delicate lace-tendrils
twined against her tender frame.
Whispers of moonlight
float across her eyes,
smothering the sunset
amidst her frosted gaze.

She hears the sound
Of sundown and sunrise,
amidst the colors in
her tired eyes.
ballerinas pirouette their illusions
to nature's lightening strike,
beneath her ebony, shadow sky,
with shooting stars spelling dreams.

Dreams of words and colors,
and whispers of wonder.
with hollow gems of tear-water
wrapping around her cheekbone.
her dreams are slipping away.
This is a collab with the absolutely wonderful :iconflawedfairytale: Go read her stuff now. :heart: Her version can be found here: [link]
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SamNickole12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Student Photographer
Featured [link] :aww:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :heart:
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SamNickole12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Student Photographer
:hug:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009   Writer
This is so beautiful. I'm in love with this poem. This is just... so amazing.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :iconflawedfairytale: is to blame for that :aww: :giggle:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2009   Writer
:meow:
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NiennaSwift Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009  Professional Writer
Favorited! It's nice to come back to DA and have your poetry piled up to read ^_^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blush: :heart:
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Tsirachel Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty. Um... I think I would like it more if you didn't italicize and bold certain words. I think it flows a little better without them. <--opinion.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Now that you mention it, it sort of does :heart: (I removed some of the more out of place formatting)

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Tsirachel Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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MyAwkwardSilence Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
:D :)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :aww:
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MyAwkwardSilence Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
:)
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BlazeMagician Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
ohhhhh :hug:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :heart:
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SweetBlackRose13 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Such beautiful imagery. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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mossflower16998 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
whoah. this is a gorgeous poem. deserves more faves.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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flawedfairytale Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Student Writer
I'm so proud of this. ^^;
Welldone us! :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Welldoneusindeed :giggle:
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