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I call you my stareater:
You've caught my dreams.

I call you my dreamcatcher:
You ate up all my stars.

Now we're just a room
Full of empty people,
Wishing and waiting
For the moment
That never will come.

We were whispers
Of a winter wind
Caught in a storm.
But it's gone now.
You're gone now.

You're just a dreamcatcher
Who can't catch me now.

You're just a stareater
Who can't hurt me now.
Response to [link] by :iconpaperheartsyndrome: (Specifically the line "I call you my stareater since you take away my dreams)

:heart: Hope you enjoy. It's a bit on the sad side though.
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saarSEZ Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009  Student General Artist
I love it :heart:
dunno why but I can relate to it very well in my own way, it perfectly describes how I've been feeling the past few days, it's great to finally find the words for it ;D
so thank you for that (:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
<3 :heart: Thanks :)
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chocolatemuack Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
you're so talented!! :glomp:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner May 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blushes:
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simplysamwise Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. :)
your wording is perfection, and you bring a very... mature feeling to it. (and I mean mature here as the opposite of immature. =P) maybe I'm not making sense, but anyway. I enjoyed it, and thank you for sharing this.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle: Thanks you sooo much for reading and enjoying my words. :heart: :aww: :blushes: :iconheartgiggle:

(I shall now go and see your gallery)
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simplysamwise Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
oh! urm. it's not worth it. definitely.
but no problem. it was a pleasure to read. =]
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platinummyr Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
But it was. So definitely worth it.
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simplysamwise Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. =]
I think, to go through your gallery, I may just have to split that up over a couple days. xDD
But here we go. :)
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