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words are like the colors of paint run dry
like summer and starlight carved in my dreams
whispers of wonder in ruby red skies
alike the sounds of my broken heart theme
my color full thoughts came out black and white
on parchment paper dipped in lostsoul ink.
found in the shape of the autumn bird's flight
lost in the middle of my cold heart blink
empty lettered moments in bright eyed stares
broken by the lyrics in a love song
i've got nothing left, but why should I care
with no more words left since it's been this long
not even giving this just one more try
when words are the colors of paint run dry
I got the line "words are like the colors of paint run dry" and decided I would turn it into a sonnet, so here you go :heart:
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A-Symmetry Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Poetic much(:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Thanks :aww:
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RedFawkes Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:faint: love... well I had to look up synonyms to find the right word!
enamored of, captivated by, enthralled by... I feel all of these things; beautiful piece, I adore it. :love: :faint:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:faint:
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RedFawkes Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
me -> :worship: :winner: <- you / your writing
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle:
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RedFawkes Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:shrug: These are true things.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:
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RedFawkes Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:manhug:
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fudgeandbiscuits Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010   Writer
:3 :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:!
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sbroxmysxo18 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
ok..I dont think love is the word I'm looking for. I don't even know what to say about this, it is just beyond every praise word in my intelligence.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:
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flawedfairytale Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Student Writer
Aah I love it. I'm a massive fan of writing that starts and ends almost the same. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe, meee tooo :love: I really loved that line.
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dynamitehackr416 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009
I knew this would be pretty from the moment you told me about it. So awesome to see it finished! :D
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe :giggle: Thanks my lovely :)
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SamNickole12 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Student Photographer
Beautiful. :heart:

=D
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:love:
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ersatz-moon Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful:heart:
it is amazing to work with you.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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ksmsoccer89 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
insanely good.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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BlueSilverUU Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
Absolutely wonderful! English sonnets are cool!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe :giggle: This isn't iambic pentameter but it does have the rhyme scheme ;)
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BlueSilverUU Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
Could've fooled me, it seemed like it was in iambic pentameter. But then I wasn't really paying attention to the meter, I was paying attention to the poem!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, well I mean to say I didn't "try" to do iambic pentameter. I use 10 syllables per line, but I don't know the natural rhythm.
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009   Writer
I like it. :)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009   Writer
:D
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Solaces Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
Gorgeous imagery.:)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thaanks :heart: :blush:
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