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Sonnet 3 by =platinummyr:iconplatinummyr:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Sonnet


words are like the colors of paint run dry
like summer and starlight carved in my dreams
whispers of wonder in ruby red skies
alike the sounds of my broken heart theme
my color full thoughts came out black and white
on parchment paper dipped in lostsoul ink.
found in the shape of the autumn bird's flight
lost in the middle of my cold heart blink
empty lettered moments in bright eyed stares
broken by the lyrics in a love song
i've got nothing left, but why should I care
with no more words left since it's been this long
not even giving this just one more try
when words are the colors of paint run dry
©2009 =platinummyr
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Author's Comments

I got the line "words are like the colors of paint run dry" and decided I would turn it into a sonnet, so here you go :heart:

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*Solaces Oct 19, 2009, 6:26:26 PM
Gorgeous imagery.:)
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=platinummyr Oct 19, 2009, 7:10:44 PM
Thaanks :heart: :blush:

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconcartheinsane:
=CartheInsane Oct 19, 2009, 7:38:22 PM
I like it. :)

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~I am a poet~
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=platinummyr Oct 19, 2009, 8:09:22 PM
<3

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconbluesilveruu:
~BlueSilverUU Oct 19, 2009, 8:22:45 PM
Absolutely wonderful! English sonnets are cool!
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~ksmsoccer89 Oct 19, 2009, 10:38:42 PM
insanely good.

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I am a lost soul desperately trying to find his way in this world of twists and turns.

Have faith. Keep hope. Dream big.
:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Oct 19, 2009, 10:47:07 PM
Hehehe :giggle: This isn't iambic pentameter but it does have the rhyme scheme ;)

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Oct 19, 2009, 10:47:13 PM
:heart:

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconpink-promise:
~Pink-Promise Oct 20, 2009, 1:17:06 AM
beautiful:heart:
it is amazing to work with you.

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it snows only once in our dreams.
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