Just a rough draft,
I found sitting in a box.
It was underneath the porch
Frozen out in the cold
Just a rough draft
Of this love I never knew.
Written in the words of
Pain I wish I had not known
Just a smudged line
A heart that's lost all it's words
And ink that's frozen over,
From the cold winter winds.
Just a young girl
Full of twisted sorrow
One more girl of a broken dream
And yet another rough draft
Just a rough draft of love
That's all love really is
Just another rough draft
Just a rough draft of love
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 Then I edited it into a song  Hope you enjoy!! Sometime, when my voice is feeling slightly less evil, and if people desire, I could attempt to fail at singing this EDIT: Old poem this is based on: Just a rough draft I found sitting in a box Underneath the porch, Frozen in the cold. Just a rough draft Of the love I never knew And the pain I wish I hadn't. Just another smudged Ink line, frozen over In the cold winter winds Of the heart that Lost it's words. One more girl of a broken dream, And a twisted sorrow, Lifeless only because she chose to be. One more moment Of yet another rough draft. Just a rough draft of love. But that's all love ever is, Just a jumble of rough drafts |
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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."
Charades - Stephen Jerzak
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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."
Charades - Stephen Jerzak
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Keep staring.
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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
and i just now started on your drawing that i promised i'd do...
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Gazing on star-encrusted hills leads to true enlightenment.
or...
you know. insanity.
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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
oh! i'm on gmail... chatting?
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Gazing on star-encrusted hills leads to true enlightenment.
or...
you know. insanity.
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