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I gaze into your
crystalline eyes and
wish I could turn back the
clock
to the time when
you loved me
as much as I loved  
you.

(but you always say that clocks
can't be turned back.
I wonder  
if you're right.)

Malicious smiles and
greedy words;
you're not the person
you started out
to be.  
I miss  
who you were
before this all went
downhill.  

I never noticed before now
but I miss the
sweet whispers of,
"I love you,"
and your eyes;
your beautiful eyes.  

Rewinding time
would be so much easier
than all this regret
I keep pent up inside
and all the memories
I force myself  
to lock away.

(I keep them locked tight
in the locket you gave me.)
This is a collab with me and :iconlosingmyfaith:

Hope you enjoy it... and check her out :) Like, right now!
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:iconfarari:
farari Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2009
Beautiful, I am very impressed. X.x
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thanks :heart:
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:iconfarari:
farari Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009
My pleasure =D
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dynamitehackr416 Featured By Owner May 23, 2009
I love it. I don't know what else to say to it.
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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kochany-deszcz Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
ohh so beautiful, especially the last stanza. I can totally relate to it :(
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
*for once I can actually take credit for the part someone liked :giggle:* :heart: Thanks soo much :)
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kochany-deszcz Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
:heart: no problem, and yay! because it indeed was my favorite part. :D
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:w00t:
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simplysamwise Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
"Malicious smiles and
greedy words;
you're not the person
you started out
to be.
I miss
who you were
before this all went
downhill."

oh, boy. I can relate to this!

but the entire poem is great.
great job.
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