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Dear justagirlDear Justagirl,
I've been meaning to write this to you for quite some time. I've always wished that I could make you see just who you really are. But you never listen. So maybe you'll hear me in this letter to who you claim to be.

You're not just any girl. Not at all. Your silence brings beauty to the words of others. Your words crack open the things left unsaid, and shine light on all the places few dare look. You have a way about you that whispers of a majesty, and yet you always hold others up beyond yourself.

Your eyes could scratch past the surface of the "he

Broken HeartsBroken hearts
Can't be mended
With a stolen hammer,
Nor fixed with
Iron fists.

Broken stars
Crash longingly
Into the crest
Of eternity,
Wishing for an end.

But it never comes.

Whispers of
That nameless fear:
Love,

Broken hearts
Are mended
On the back
Of unrelenting sorrow.

Broken stars
Fall into your hands,
Where words craft
A bridge to nowhere.

That's exactly where you are.

daylight starsalways where you need to be
glittering sunshine into winter woods
and breathing summer into autumn days

always where i wish i were
waiting on a dawnlight never comes

never comes never comes

always right here where my heart
wisheswisheswishes she could be
in the midst of daylightstars

Wateredup Phrasesi still think i'm sundrenched thoughts
and wateredup phrases of longfound dreams.
i still remember those starlit nightskies
and whispered iloveyous found beaten
on the corners of broken curbs.
i can't escape these thoughtsideaswords
that shine from your moonlight eyes:
i am whispered conversations in a smile.

Here We AreAnd here I stand again,
whispering words I know
that she will never hear:

It's drowned out by a
shriveling darkness of words
so harsh and broken.

When I speak of beauty,
she hears shouts of emptiness.

When I whisper love,
she only finds hatred

Words left unsaidone.

I wish you could see that you aren't empty. You're not worthless. But everytime you say it, you just forget a little bit more. I can't hold you up forever. I won't always be around.

[You have to learn to live your own life, I can't keep doing it for you]

two.

I still remember those sun drenched days, and starry nights. I still remember your voice, and the words we used to say. And sometimes I still remember the regret and pain. I try not to, but I can't help it. I prayed for you the other night. I wish you weren't so gone, even when you're not.

[How can so much regret remain?]

three.

I wish I could understand this thing c

Dewdrop TearsYou've got dewdrop tears
    and sunlit hair.
A whispered glow
    from one more year...

I've seen you here
    with all your fears.
A starbright heart
  cause he's so near...

You know you're all
    that I can hear.
These are the words,
   You'll read, so fair.

Truth Is What You'll Findthe truth is, i never really know.
i don't know what i'm feeling,
or why my heart skips three beats
when she walks down hallways
that i've never even seen.

the truth is, that somedays i
feel like i'm holding air,
bottling feelings till they explode.
whispering secrets to the night sky
and wishing i could feel.

i don't know what i'm not saying,
and i wish that i could hold her.
but that can't happen. it's not possible.
i can't be there when the sun sets;

all this fear is seeping out
of the wholes that i thought
i closed up so very long ago.
and i don't know what to think.

the truth is: i don't know
the secret is: i wish i di

Just LettersBut I'm just letters,
That you'll never see.
I'm just words typed
On a blank screen,
The shining bright white
Staring back at me.

Numbers dialing nowhere
Won't reach me,
And whispered "iloveyous"
On the radio signal
Can't reach into
The Faraday cage that
I call my heart.

Cause I'm just a deaf man,
Lying on the backstreet,
Hoping there is no one
Mistaking me for dead:
But you've known
That's all I am inside.

What will he hear?when whispers from her lips
reach heavy laden ears with
secret words and secret hearts:

What will he hear?

Immortal _Collab_They said flying is easy,
When you can't die;
It's just drowning in a pastime,
burning in addiction.

I'm sick sicksick
Of this never ending li(f)e

I'm almost scared
to check my pulse...
who knew a heart
could beat so long?

[I know yours doesn't]

You're just empty like
A barren field.
Piano key ribcage and
Silver lined veins
Is this what we've become?

This isn't what I meant
When I said we'd last forever.

Words, Words, WordsWords, words, words..
What a wonderful weapon,
Says the little devil
Floating beside our shoulders.

What are these bones?
They're not quite brittle
Won't they ever hurt enough

But hearts, warm hearts
Now those, those are
Easy to break, and twist,
And tear so that
Ripe blood drips everywhere.

It is with words that we are broken,
And with anger that we shatter.

No amount of broken bones
Could ever hurt like
A broken heart

dreamcolordreams are just the pigment
in which reality is painted

The Letter Nn

nightsky dreams and
never spoken whispers:
the many meanings
attached to peopleplacesthings.

echoes of wisdom
found in the emptiness
between the stars:
beginnings of a definition
of who someone ought to be.

Is there any power in a name?

Sonnet 3words are like the colors of paint run dry
like summer and starlight carved in my dreams
whispers of wonder in ruby red skies
alike the sounds of my broken heart theme
my color full thoughts came out black and white
on parchment paper dipped in lostsoul ink.
found in the shape of the autumn bird's flight
lost in the middle of my cold heart blink
empty lettered moments in bright eyed stares
broken by the lyrics in a love song
i've got nothing left, but why should I care
with no more words left since it's been this long
not even giving this just one more try
when words are the colors of paint run dry

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I'll think about youOh, I'll think about you and I'll dream about you all the time
The air is full of your sweet perfume
The time is left with your empty fumes

Oh, I see without you but still I hear about you like a crime
The fire is full of your sad truth
I'm left to tend your dieing fruit

Oh, You'll here me shout names, but I'll always 'member you
The memory is gone and
The song is fading with the band

Oh, You'll cry without me, and you'll sing about me when your blue
The empty pain is just to real
Something that I can never feel

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by =platinummyr, Apr 22, 2009, 7:53:14 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Free Verse

I gaze into your
crystalline eyes and
wish I could turn back the
clock
to the time when
you loved me
as much as I loved
you.

(but you always say that clocks
can't be turned back.
I wonder
if you're right.)

Malicious smiles and
greedy words;
you're not the person
you started out
to be.
I miss
who you were
before this all went
downhill.

I never noticed before now
but I miss the
sweet whispers of,
"I love you,"
and your eyes;
your beautiful eyes.

Rewinding time
would be so much easier
than all this regret
I keep pent up inside
and all the memories
I force myself
to lock away.

(I keep them locked tight
in the locket you gave me.)

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~farari Aug 27, 2009

Beautiful, I am very impressed. X.x

=platinummyr Aug 27, 2009 Hobbyist Writer

Thanks

~farari Aug 28, 2009

My pleasure

~dynamitehackr416 May 23, 2009

I love it. I don't know what else to say to it.

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~kochany-deszcz May 4, 2009

ohh so beautiful, especially the last stanza. I can totally relate to it

=platinummyr May 4, 2009 Hobbyist Writer

*for once I can actually take credit for the part someone liked

Thanks soo much

~kochany-deszcz May 4, 2009

no problem, and yay! because it indeed was my favorite part.

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~simplysamwise May 4, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

"Malicious smiles and
greedy words;
you're not the person
you started out
to be.
I miss
who you were
before this all went
downhill."

oh, boy. I can relate to this!

but the entire poem is great.
great job.

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