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What we need has power over us.
Be careful what you think you need.

You say you need a simple car,
But do you really?
You say you need to have a lover
But do you really?

When you say you need something,
You let that thing have power over you.
Choices you make will be stitched with that color
Don't let want's turn into needs.

You want things, those are good.
You need things, those are good.
But wants are never needs.
Remember that.
©2006-2009 =platinummyr
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I agree with this piece and it's message wholeheartedly.

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The Winds of Time Erode the Soul.

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Thankies :):)

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
It's good, but it feels like it should be longer. To me, I mean.

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For something to be a masterpiece, it must not only imbue a sense of regret upon completion, but also cause an undefinable longing for the fiction to be anything but. One day, I hope to create something that fits that description.
indeed ^^
sounds good. sometimes what we own..gets to own us
VERY Good point, actually that really spoke to me. I was just thinking about that kind of thing last night and.... well, very good point I must say!

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I'm a writer by nature [link] but everything else for fun.
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very good! very blunt. :)

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May the Strength of God fill your hearts

Jeremiah 29:11
For I know the plans I have for you," declares the LORD, "plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future
Very well spoken

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If you please, look at my stuff and read my stories and dont be afraid to tell me your thoughts. I only bite the ladies I love. And if you like then buy a print and support a Katrina victim
Yah, it COULD have been longer, but I was really tired.

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
Yeh.

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together

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