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maybe i'm dreaming,
but if i'm dreaming of you
then why should i care?
:love: I wrote this for [link] by :iconronaaa:
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Rona-Keller Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
I never saw this :heart:

I'm thinking about our collab now and then. I just want to do something we'll really like. :hug:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Random interjection many months later: You succeeded :heart:
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Rona-Keller Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
:love: thank you :hug:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: :heart:

Yeah :) Once you have a photo, I'd like to try overlaying the words onto the photo, maybe? Cause I'd really love to buy a print of that. :giggle:
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:iconrona-keller:
Rona-Keller Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
I thought about printing it and include it in the picture, but if you'd like to do it that way we probably should talk about it first :D
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
For sure. :giggle: I wasn't sure But yeah, you need a photo first!
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Rona-Keller Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
haha but I don't want to take one without knowing how we're going to include the text :aww:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I can mock up an example using a different one of your photos as an example of what I am imagining? :giggle: I won't know for sure how I'd want to do it until I see the photo, but I think I have a good idea. Basically the text would be faded into the picture so it's readable, but doesn't block the picture.
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Rona-Keller Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009
I'm so sorry I haven't replied yet, I'm really stressed out. but I will soon.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, no problem :heart: Don't stress yourself out more That would be not good.
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TreLore Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
Nicely Done
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe :heart: Thanks for taking the time to read.
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TreLore Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
Your Very Welcome
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LittleMissNowhere Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
This is really nice, you get such a complete thought across in such a short piece :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:love: This little piece was such fun to write :heart:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009   Writer
This works out so well. Sometimes it's so hard to write haiku without it being choppy sounding, but you managed a flow with this. :heart: I love it, because I didn't even KNOW it was a haiku till I saw the category you placed it in.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Yes, haiku is hard to write well in. The small space is a huge constraining factor. But I love to practice it, it helps develop elegance. (That is, using fewer words to say more. No misplaced word)
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009   Writer
Yeah. :hug:
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ALovelyMeInside Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Haha cute!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :love:
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icantwrite Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
Love it!!! Like all the best Haikus it needed to be written and once written you can't imagine it any other way!!! :)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :love: :blush: Thank you soso much :giggle:
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icantwrite Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
You're very welcome :D
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varawdn Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
very... sweet, i think is the word i want... either way, it's an instafave
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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Tsirachel Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. I think the last line would work a little better if you changed "would" to "should" though.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:love: I like it a lot better that way!
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Tsirachel Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Awesome.
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BlueSilverUU Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
Very nice.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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poetcourt Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Professional Writer
pretty :D kind of a not so subtle ending, sounds sharp to me, like making an arguementative point, as well as a possible chat up line/flirt
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Well it's supposed to be a sort of a response to "you're just a dreamer" :giggle:
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poetcourt Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Professional Writer
ooh cool, i just wrote a poem last night called 'Fear of falling' i should put it on laters woo!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle:
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poetcourt Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Professional Writer
argh i better get going, i gotta make toast, eat toast, grab my stuff and leg it for the bus :L:L sixthform*sighs*maybe i'll do more writing lol, anyways i gtg, bye, oh, and i likes it:D
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