Well, I can mock up an example using a different one of your photos as an example of what I am imagining? I won't know for sure how I'd want to do it until I see the photo, but I think I have a good idea. Basically the text would be faded into the picture so it's readable, but doesn't block the picture.
This works out so well. Sometimes it's so hard to write haiku without it being choppy sounding, but you managed a flow with this. I love it, because I didn't even KNOW it was a haiku till I saw the category you placed it in.