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But I'm just letters,
That you'll never see.
I'm just words typed
On a blank screen,
The shining bright white
Staring back at me.

Numbers dialing nowhere
Won't reach me,
And whispered "iloveyous"
On the radio signal
Can't reach into
The Faraday cage that
I call my heart.

Cause I'm just a deaf man,
Lying on the backstreet,
Hoping there is no one
Mistaking me for dead:
But you've known
That's all I am inside.
Wrote this in response to wonderful :iconpaperheartsyndrome:s [link]

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kazumisangel Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009
Just because we don't actually hear each other or see each other speak does not mean that there is no love or friendship...that's my response to my interpretation, at least. :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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fierypoplartree Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
oh my, i love this so much.
i'm actually in love with what you write.
:heart:
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my :blushes:
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fierypoplartree Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
:)
:heart:
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simplysamwise Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW. this is my favorite of yours.
in EVER.
stellar job!
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blushes: :giggle: :heart: Thanks!
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simplysamwise Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure. :D
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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ksmsoccer89 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
this is awesome. it flows so effortlessly and is very vivd with the imagery. its incredibly well-written as a whole :)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blushes:

Thanks so much for reading!
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ksmsoccer89 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
youre very welcome friend :)
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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UntittledStranger Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009   Photographer
It REALLY makes me think!!!!
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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EmmyIsAZebra Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
It very lovely!!!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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dynamitehackr416 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
so pretty! as is everything that i read of yours :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :aww: :giggle: :iconsqueeeplz:
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dynamitehackr416 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
:iconcarameldansenplz:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcarameldansenplz:
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chocolatemuack Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
:heart:
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chocolatemuack Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
:heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes:
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kochany-deszcz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
last stanza... :heart: wow
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: :heart:
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ALovelyMeInside Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
*applauds* I love it, brilliant!
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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