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But I'm just letters,
That you'll never see.
I'm just words typed
On a blank screen,
The shining bright white
Staring back at me.

Numbers dialing nowhere
Won't reach me,
And whispered "iloveyous"
On the radio signal
Can't reach into
The Faraday cage that
I call my heart.

Cause I'm just a deaf man,
Lying on the backstreet,
Hoping there is no one
Mistaking me for dead:
But you've known
That's all I am inside.

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Wrote this in response to wonderful :iconpaperheartsyndrome:s [link]

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:iconkazumisangel:
Just because we don't actually hear each other or see each other speak does not mean that there is no love or friendship...that's my response to my interpretation, at least. :heart:
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:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Oct 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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:iconfierypoplartree:
oh my, i love this so much.
i'm actually in love with what you write.
:heart:
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~simplysamwise Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW. this is my favorite of yours.
in EVER.
stellar job!
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:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: :blushes: :giggle: :heart: Thanks!
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~simplysamwise Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure. :D
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:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconksmsoccer89:
this is awesome. it flows so effortlessly and is very vivd with the imagery. its incredibly well-written as a whole :)
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