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Oh, I'll think about you and I'll dream about you all the time
The air is full of your sweet perfume
The time is left with your empty fumes
Oh, I see without you but still I hear about you like a crime
The fire is full of your sad truth
I'm left to tend your dieing fruit
Oh, You'll here me shout names, but I'll always 'member you
The memory is gone and
The song is fading with the band
Oh, You'll cry without me, and you'll sing about me when your blue
The empty pain is just to real
Something that I can never feel
The air is full of your sweet perfume
The time is left with your empty fumes
Oh, I see without you but still I hear about you like a crime
The fire is full of your sad truth
I'm left to tend your dieing fruit
Oh, You'll here me shout names, but I'll always 'member you
The memory is gone and
The song is fading with the band
Oh, You'll cry without me, and you'll sing about me when your blue
The empty pain is just to real
Something that I can never feel
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This is my best attempt at surreal... lol, hope 
like's it, since she asked me for a surreal poem. 
If it's not, just tell me, and help me write one 
like's it, since she asked me for a surreal poem. If it's not, just tell me, and help me write one © 2006 - 2024 platinummyr
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Heck I still loved it! nice visuals. : )