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And here I stand again,
whispering words I know
that she will never hear:

It's drowned out by a
shriveling darkness of words
so harsh and broken.

When I speak of beauty,
she hears shouts of emptiness.

When I whisper love,
she only finds hatred
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:iconbunnyheadwounds:
Beautiful... :)
I've been wandering through your gallery, your work is simply wonderful.
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=platinummyr Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
<3 :blush: Thank you so much!! :hug: PS: I love your signature.
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wow, very well worded. I'm impressed. It's like a gunshot. Bang.
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=platinummyr Sep 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:love:
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~NiennaSwift Sep 27, 2009  Professional Writer
Hearing what you want..
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=platinummyr Sep 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
We all hear what makes it through the stainglass filter that makes us who we are. No one really hears what someone is saying.
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~NiennaSwift Sep 28, 2009  Professional Writer
I've seriously just been comtemplating that concept!! I love it how we're ont he same page... Tibetan Buddhist's say your mind is just a crystal, and everything it percieves is perceived through filters that aren't necessarily true..
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=platinummyr Sep 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Something like that :giggle: I just think the "unquestioned" beliefs we hold at the inner part of our mind/being color how we see things. Often we don't even know that we believe something. A good example: some psychologists say that if you were to ask an anorexic to look into a mirror and you could actually get an image of what they perceive in the mirror you would see someone overweight. Because their mind colors what they see.
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~NiennaSwift Oct 10, 2009  Professional Writer
That's true. I've had eating disorder issues and you never see what's true. When I was 14 I was anorexic, and when I was 16 I got to my lowest weight, but thought I was huge, didn't look any different to myself. Now that I've balanced out I realize how skinny I was and wish I had enjoyed it then, instead of seeing someone huge in the mirror.
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=platinummyr Oct 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah :hug: That's gotta be very tough to deal with.
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