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Upon this grassy slope I sing,
These praises in my heart I bring.
Above me, I can glance the sky,
Where angels praise the Lord on high.

The sunset slowly falls afore
Like sweet Heaven's open door.
The words I sing shall break my heart,
As they split it all apart.

Shattered, here I sit,
I even almost try to quit.
Friends around me change my mind
These ties are strong, they seem to bind.

I cannot leave Thee
Though it shall try me
This love is far to strong
Nothing ever can go wrong.

For you are the Lord of me
Nothing I have can equal Thee.
So, shall I praise You to the end?
Or stand up from bended knee?
©2006-2009 =platinummyr
:iconplatinummyr:

Author's Comments

This is a poem I felt like writing, after an awesome guys group tonight. Its kind of a mix of my heart, and the heart of one of my friends. At least, I believe it is. Hope you all enjoy.

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:iconemerald-lit:
awesomeness.... I really like it!!! whoot... there isn't enough poetry on God these days.... I could read on and on and on.....

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live to love, love to fight, fight to be free, be free to love


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or here: ~emerald-rose
:iconemerald-lit:
p.s definatly a fav!!

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live to love, love to fight, fight to be free, be free to love


check me out here: ~emerald-lit
or here: ~emerald-rose
:iconnym-ph:
uá, sounds great! you were possesed when you wrote this werent you? :D
:iconplatinummyr:
Hehehe... thanks :) I just wrote it lolz

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconplatinummyr:
w00t!

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconplatinummyr:
Umm... I think maybe just. I felt like writing poetry, so I just wrote, didn't have to think to hard, those are the best poems.

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconemerald-lit:
haha nice...

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live to love, love to fight, fight to be free, be free to love


check me out here: ~emerald-lit
or here: ~emerald-rose
:iconplatinummyr:
:blush:

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*TheWritersMeow
We’re all victims in a battle that we never had to fight
It’s ok it’s alright, steady now we’re in this thing together
:iconliving4him:
you have a talent! you really do. :hug: lovely words.

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Keep staring.
:iconlynnlove4:
Love it. Very nice.

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