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Upon this grassy slope I sing,
These praises in my heart I bring.
Above me, I can glance the sky,
Where angels praise the Lord on high.

The sunset slowly falls afore
Like sweet Heaven's open door.
The words I sing shall break my heart,
As they split it all apart.

Shattered, here I sit,
I even almost try to quit.
Friends around me change my mind
These ties are strong, they seem to bind.

I cannot leave Thee
Though it shall try me
This love is far to strong
Nothing ever can go wrong.

For you are the Lord of me
Nothing I have can equal Thee.
So, shall I praise You to the end?
Or stand up from bended knee?
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This is a poem I felt like writing, after an awesome guys group tonight. Its kind of a mix of my heart, and the heart of one of my friends. At least, I believe it is. Hope you all enjoy.
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:icongraycedreamer:
Sad day for my not being on recently! this one especially is beautiful and very moving. :)
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=platinummyr Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh? :) This one is an old favorite of mine :heart:
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:icongraycedreamer:
Well it's truly beautiful :D
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=platinummyr Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle:
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:iconbrisni:
:star:

This is great!
I really, really like this.

A lot.
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=platinummyr May 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:D :aww: Thanks! :) It's one of my favorites also.. *hence why I pulled it out of my super large gallery of crazy sauce*
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=platinummyr May 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha :P
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:icontrelore:
I love this one and the flow and the rhymes of the words is beautiful until the end the only thing I would add is these words

or you are the Lord of me?
Nothing I have can equal Thee.
So, shall I praise You to the end?
Or turn around on this bended Knee?

Just a humble suggestion
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=platinummyr Jun 9, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thanks. I shall look into that, and see if I like it. Always glad of suggestions and help :) Very glad you like this one, its actually one of my most favorite poems
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