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You've got dewdrop tears
    and sunlit hair.
A whispered glow
    from one more year...

I've seen you here
    with all your fears.
A starbright heart
  cause he's so near...

You know you're all
    that I can hear.
These are the words,
   You'll read, so fair.
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Wrote this for :iconkochany-deszcz:, since she wanted something written to her for her birthday :giggle:
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~SweetBlackRose13 Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet :heart:
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=platinummyr Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :aww: :giggle: :blush:
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~SweetBlackRose13 Jul 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
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~flawedfairytale Jul 21, 2009  Student Writer
There's a beautiful flow to this piece- and the title, (which made me read it ^^;), is stunning.
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=platinummyr Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :heart:
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:iconfierypoplartree:
this is gorgeous and quite melodic. :)
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=platinummyr Jun 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmhm :) I wish I had more time to work on it!! (silly full time jobs get in the way)
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:iconfierypoplartree:
oh dear, that's unfortunate. :(
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=platinummyr Jun 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:( Chyeah, but I do gets paid!
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