Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Dearest No One by =platinummyr:iconplatinummyr:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Life Stories


Dearest "No One":

I got your letter today. I'm wishing I could see you, and maybe I will one day. At least in these letters, words, thoughts, dreams, paintings, pictures.

The nightmare called life seems to have stripped you bare. You said you thought I'd know what to say? Well I don't... (But that's never stopped me anyways).

Please don't cry for too long. But I know you will. I can still smell the salty tears on the edge of the paper.

I'm sorry that words will never be enough. Never enough. And it wouldn't matter if I pretended to hold you. You'd know it's just a lie. That's all we ever have.

But you're lovely, and wonderful. Someday... maybe you could tell me your real name?

Love,

Someone
©2009-2010 =platinummyr
:iconplatinummyr:

Author's Comments

:heart: Found this laying around on [link] by the wonderful writer, :iconamertie: If you don't know her work then go read it now.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconliving4him:
=living4him Aug 14, 2009, 12:16:01 PM
you always seem to give hope.
wait,
I know you give hope.

--
Keep staring.
:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Aug 17, 2009, 4:33:49 PM
Hehehe :aww:

--
*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconflawedfairytale:
~flawedfairytale Jul 20, 2009, 10:54:23 AM
"And it wouldn't matter if I pretended to hold you. You'd know it's just a lie. That's all we ever have."- stunning. So heart-wrenching, and the raw emotions of the piece are laid bare so beautifully, you can't help become drawn into the writing. An utterly stunning piece. :heart:

--
the greatest thing you will ever learn is just to love, and be loved in return.
:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Jul 20, 2009, 11:01:23 AM
:aww: :blush: Thanks for reading! :)

I think this is one of my favorite works I've done. (But of course I could never actually choose.) :heart:

--
*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconflawedfairytale:
~flawedfairytale Jul 20, 2009, 11:05:46 AM
A pleasure- I thought I might look through your writing, as you are mine! ^^;
Aha, I find it hard to choose favourites. That's great- it's a beautiful piece. :heart:

--
the greatest thing you will ever learn is just to love, and be loved in return.
:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Jul 20, 2009, 11:15:22 AM
^^; :giggle: Yeah. I'll be able to read some more of your work later today.

--
*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconemrose88:
~Emrose88 Jul 19, 2009, 4:41:23 PM
intriguing!!!! :+fav:

--
We love Him because He first loved us. 1 John 4:19
:iconplatinummyr:
=platinummyr Jul 19, 2009, 4:47:12 PM
Thanks :heart:

--
*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconemrose88:
~Emrose88 Jul 19, 2009, 4:57:34 PM
:D

--
We love Him because He first loved us. 1 John 4:19
:iconxxladouleurexquisexx:
~xxladouleurexquisexx Jul 17, 2009, 10:42:17 PM
aww lovely :)

--
I have loved to the point of madness;
That which is called madness,
That which to me, is the only sensible way to love.

Francoise Sagan
Previous Page12Next Page

Found in these Groups:

Not currently found in a Group

Details

July 17, 2009
926 bytes

Statistics

18
16 [who?]
70 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Site Map

©2010 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy