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The air I breath
It's growing thick
Things are going crazy
And I don't know why...

Maybe its the place I am...
Or is it the songs that are playing?
I'll never never know...
But I long to know the answers

Please speak to me Lord?
I really don't know what to say.
He's standing there before me
Lost and searching for his soul...

What are the thoughts
and the moments of his heart?
I don't understand how
You can love him today...
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This is a poem I wrote in response to a poem by one of my friends... she asked me to post it, so here y'are!
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... this is the air I breathe, this is the air i breathe... and I, I am lost with out you... your title brings that sound to mind.
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=platinummyr Sep 23, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:d It's supposed to!
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:iconmagaman:
love it man! :hug: ur awesome ^^ :highfive:
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=platinummyr Oct 8, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!!
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